Headline Writing Tips. 15 Examples How A Poorly Written Headline Can Communicate The Wrong Idea

When it comes to headline writing tips, the first professional tip is knowing what NOT to do.

Writers of magazines, newspapers, and blogs try to write short, meaningful headlines to capture the heart of the story and can still capture a readers attention.

The problem comes when the writer either spends too much time tweaking the headline or simply gets too close to the story to read their shortened headlines with a truly fresh and unbiased perspective.

And these final, edited headlines can create some unexpected results. Here are 15 examples how a badly written headline can communicate the wrong idea

Headline Writing Tips. 15 Best Actual News Headlines

Something Went Wrong in Jet Crash, Expert Says

Police Begin Campaign to Run Down Jaywalkers

Panda Mating Fails; Veterinarian Takes Over

Juvenile Court to Try Shooting Defendant

War Dims Hope for Peace

If Strike Isn’t Settled Quickly, It May Last Awhile

Cold Wave Linked to Temperatures

Enfield (London) Couple Slain; Police Suspect Homicide

Red Tape Holds Up New Bridges

Man Struck By Lightning: Faces Battery Charge

New Study of Obesity Looks for Larger Test Group

Kids Make Nutritious Snacks

Local High School Dropouts Cut in Half

Hospitals are Sued by 7 Foot Doctors


And the winner of the worst headline of the year is…

Typhoon Rips Through Cemetery; Hundreds Dead


The above headline examples are leads for some very serious stories, yet the importance is not only lost, but resulted in some very funny headlines — a consequence I’m sure that neither the writer or newspaper editor intended.

One of the best headline writing tips is to avoid having your story turned into something that it wasn’t meant to be.

The best option is to hiring a professional proofreader.

Outside of that, the next best option is to have an objective third party review your story headline and give their “unprofessional” opinion.

For example, whenever I thought I had a great headline or concept, I’d ask the office receptionist for feedback.

I can tell you from personal experience, this saved me many times from turning in work I thought was really great — only to find out that it was only “really great” in my own head.

I was simply too close to the project to be objective.

Because when the receptionist looks up at you with a truly confused look in their eyes, you know it’s time to rethink what you’re writing.

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